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This world  is so crazy
Why is everything so hazy
Why is it hard to see
The person inside of me

No matter what place I go
I can't seem to fit in with the flow
As my life passes me by
I wonder if it is a lie

No matter how much I try
All I ever do is cry
Why can't I see
How I am supposed to be

I want people to know
that I have something to show
I want to be the one

to change the world...

I try to keep a smile
but it is hard after a while
this obstacles in my way
almost every single day

this life is full of bliss
and some happiness
why is it so hard to find
especially if you rewind

back into my past
I was always  there last
for the one's who needed me
It was hard for me to see

that I am living today
trying to make things my way
living life staying strong
as I move along

I want everyone to know
that I am here to show
that I want to be here

and change the world..
Some random thing I came up with.
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FullmoonDarkstar Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student
O.o....That's how I feel...but I am totally sure that I can't change the world, more likely driving it crazy.... X3 LOL!! Anyway......where was I?....Oh, yeah....I-L-O-V-E-I-T!!!!! :D
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, I highly doubt that you would drive it crazy! XD I am more likely the type of person to do that Xp I am really glad that you like my poems! Do you have any suggestions as to which theme I should do next for a poem? :3
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AnimeWarrior8 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow,very nice~
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you very much! =3 :hug: How have you been? =)
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AnimeWarrior8 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome~I've been doing pretty well!You?
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am glad to hear you are doing well :hug:. I guess I haven't been the best. I feel worn out for some reason =/
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AnimeWarrior8 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no,I hope you feel better soon:hug:
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you very much my awesome friend =3 :hug: :tighthug:
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AnimeWarrior8 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome~=D:hug:
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RueSinger Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love it :)
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you so much! :hug: I may make another one soon =3
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RueSinger Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I think you should, they're really pretty :)
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank-you so much! :hug: I will be sure to make more! =)
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RueSinger Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome :) YAY :happybounce: !
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe yes! I think I am going to make a song next =3 :hug:
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RueSinger Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You write your own music too? If so I do that to :D If not that's still cool :) I LOVE music :)
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes I do! Well, not quite on my own. When I used to have some sort of friends at school, they would write the music, and I would write the lyrics to it =3 Now I just mostly write lyrics since I am not very good with instruments yet, but I like to sing =) I love music too! =D
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Uber-Dan Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome.
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you very much! =3
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Uber-Dan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconywplz:
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ShadowNighthunter Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it....it hits to the core
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you so much! :hug: I always find myself creating things like this =3 I sort of want to turn some of them into a song =3
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ShadowNighthunter Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe you will :D
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe someday =3 I am just going to stick to making poems for now though X3
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ShadowNighthunter Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's the best way to start :)
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are right! :hug: =3 I am going to try to come up with a song for my music class =)
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ShadowNighthunter Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice! I wish you luck!
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank-you very much! :meow: =D
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TheBlondeReaper Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student General Artist
powerful
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess so. What we talked about yesterday sort of inspired it =3
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Awesome-Noob Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it and you
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, thank-you! Aww, I love you too my awesome hug Buddy! =3 :huggle:
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Awesome-Noob Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your the best x3
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, aww! Thank-you so much! :hug: You are too! XD
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