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When life gives you pain
as your walking in the rain
and you don't know where to go
cause your life's like a horror show

don't give up on yourself
don't give up on your life
as you walk through the shadow
of a heart broken life

there will be harder days
days you can't stand the world
but as long as you know that
you will be heard  

Don't give up--------

Just don't give up------

you are beautifully unique
don't listen to what others say
especially if they want to
ruin your entire day

there's a purpose to everyone
no matter who you are
if you believe this fact
then you will make it far

Don't give up-------

Just don't give up---------
It's true. Never give up, your dreams may seem far from reach, but you just have to hold on. Don't give up on your dreams, or being who you are. You can be anything you want to be. Just don't give up!
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Never stop walking" quote from D. Gray Man :meow:
Once again you have written a poem amazingly :D
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have heard of that quote before! :meow: and thank-you so so much! I really have to start getting back into writing poems again and you have given me the inspiration to do so!:D :meow: :hug: :tighthug:
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. I'm glad to have given you some inspiration :D
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! I am going to try making a poem later on after I get done with all of my school work and stuff! :D
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Heartwhispers90 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Great poem .. very nice concept .. :clap:
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you very much! =D It was fun making it! =3
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Raiyn7918 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
This is actually really beautiful... No matter how may times someone may read this, they may not feel the same.. I worry about them...
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you very much!! :huggle: :hug: and I worry about those people too, I wrote it because I feel like giving up sometimes, but I know that if I do, then I will never make it anywhere. As long as there is will, you have the power to do anything =3
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Raiyn7918 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
True, i wish everyone thinks that way...
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree, it would be nice if everyone thought that way..
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ShiningMoon15 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Writer
Its beautiful and meaningful. A great job well done. Very inspirational. ^^
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you so much! that means a lot to me! :huggle: :hug:
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ShiningMoon15 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Writer
No problem.
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Bowtiefoxin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"there's a purpose to everyone no matter who you are" thats exactly what it tell myself whenever i feel down! X3
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww wow! That is awesome! It is like I stole the words right from you X3 lol!
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Bowtiefoxin Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
X3 stop taking my stuff
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am sorry XD I didn't mean to take it, please don't arrest me for plagiarism X3 lol. That is weird though, it was like I used your mind to write a piece of them poem =3
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Bowtiefoxin Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll let you off with a warnig this time, but dont let me catch you doing it again XD
heh :3 magic! :iconspazattackplz:
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, alright! XD I promise I won't do it again Xp I will ask for your permission next time X3
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Bowtiefoxin Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good C:
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am just glad you aren't going to have me arrested or something X3 lol.
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Uber-Dan Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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Neko-Scourge Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
This is beautiful....
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you so much!! :hug:
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stealthclaw96 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful, and so true :)
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0124nathan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you so much!! :hug: and I think it is true too =3
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